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Social Disaster.
By Rachael.

Provoking thoughts lead to new repudiated filled eyes.
Mocking defaced deceit enjoys cluttered advoidence.
Cutting down misled love leaves uncherished plans rotton.
Blaming the rhythm of a vision closed inside a nonrelenting mind.
Serenity seems powerless and locked up in equal funds.
Wealth becomes object of affection in shiney gold lies.
Observed unstatisfied wine collects cold hearts in a long line.
Sitting in unfilled rejection endears timeless unlearned guidance.
Devouring in self-proclaimed advocacy helps falling into a lonely pit.
Melting in bitter agony loses its popular advantage in a glance.
Staring through unclear desire makes moving attire admirable.
Commanding an expansion of starring horizons in any willing sponsors.
Discovering only one acquisition left.
                                                         Emptiness.
©2006-2009 ~BulletProofPrincess
:iconbulletproofprincess:

Author's Comments

Greed. Money. Power.

I didn't know what section to put it in
so I put it in this one.

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:iconpisstified:
Your style of writing is unique and lovely.
I could tell it was yours if I found it
on a piece of notebook paper outside.
It would be weird if I did, but still...
you get what I'm saying.
:iconbulletproofprincess:
Yes I do.
And thank you.
Your comment is really
appreciated and made
me smile. :D

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Pompous bragging and neurotic magazines
Expose your insecurities- (Are You) Happy?- Reagan Youth
:iconsweetasthyblackrose:
ok... i have this 'thing' about beginnings of poetry lines, such as... i don't like it when the beginnings start with the same letter over and over, and i noticed you put it perfectly, so great job on that...

it makes you think, and i like that. some poems you read and it's pretty obvious, but this sort of has a deeper meaning. so great job on that too...

good choice of words, they fit perfectly in place like a puzzle, you have a true gift in that. and YET ANOTHER great job

brilliant job overall!!! :D

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"Promises are like babies: Easy to make, Hard to Deliver"
-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! >.> well, I thought it was funny...
:iconbulletproofprincess:
Aww, Thanks alot. :D
*hugs*

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Pompous bragging and neurotic magazines
Expose your insecurities- (Are You) Happy?- Reagan Youth
:icontombec:
Nothing exceeds like excess and you point that out very well for someone as young as you. I like your style, Rachael and I'll be watching! Len.
:iconbulletproofprincess:
Yay! Thanks.
I looove comments
like yours. They make
me happy. :D

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Pompous bragging and neurotic magazines
Expose your insecurities- (Are You) Happy?- Reagan Youth
:iconsweetasthyblackrose:
*hugs back* you're very welcome

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"Promises are like babies: Easy to make, Hard to Deliver"
-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! >.> well, I thought it was funny...
:icongryffchaser44:
im watching u. nuff said actually no i gotta say more, your writing rox my sox. it actually makes you think and makes you tempted to read it over and over no matter how long it is. Keep it up!!!

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